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As we all know, the education plays a very important role in our life. Everyone must understand it himself.
Nowadays the education in our country has some problems, though the government pays considerable attention to it. There are problems as: Shortage of teachers, because they receive little wages. There are no jobs for graduates of universities, colleges, technical schools and others; there for our country proceed unexpectedly to the market economy. Factories and other workplaces stopped their work-it is heap of people who haven’t job plus graduates, who want to work, in result big unemployment has appeared. Fault to all this is 1991-95th civil war, after which the country becomes poor. Certainly our country is not advanced as the USA and Bulgaria, but despite of it our country develops and types new courses.
As I know USA and Bulgaria are highly development countries, I think in development countries pay the big attention to education. There are not problems like at us. In my opinion if I would receive education at AUBG, my knowledge would be differ than knowledge of university students of Tajikistan. Thus my advantage will be in that I’ll be far from home and nothing will distract me from study. Then I can study those subjects which didn’t study at my country. To study English more deeply simultaneously studying and communicating in it. Having received education in АUBG, I could find good job in my Native land, as I shall receive new knowledge, which is not present in my country, which helps me to achieve much, which helps me to work for the blessings of people, to be a socially responsible.
Essence of “social responsibility” means that socially responsible man must work hard for the blessings of society, for improvement of a life of people. To try, that quality of education becomes better, to create convenience for schoolchildren and students. While I am a student, and not much social responsibilities at me, but I know, that it will be doubled when I shall study in АUBG, because I shall represent Tajikistan among the students of all nationalities. I know that many people of foreign countries don’t know about my Tajikistan. I’ll be very proud to tell them about my Tajikistan, about its history, culture, people and others.
I think all of them are possible only when the national economy will develop. The country will be richer and will allocate more money for education.
Being the student of economic faculty, it is very interesting for me to learn economy in the advanced country. What they still study than us? In future I want to become an economist and to serve very hard to my Motherland. |
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Nowadays the education in our country encounters some problems, although the government pays considerable attention to it. There most common problems are as follows:
1. Shortage of teachers, because they receive little salaries.
2. The graduates from universities, colleges, technical schools etc can't find work;
3. The country's jerk to the market economy. As a result factories and other workplaces stopped their work and there appeared a crowd of people who have lost their jobs plus graduates, who want to work, but can't find a vacancy. This resulted in civil war (1991-95), that impoverished the country. Certainly our country is not as advanced as the USA and Bulgaria, but nevertheless our we havn't ceased our efforts to go on with the reforms. |
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